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UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE INTERNATIONAL EXAMINATIONS International General Certificate of Secondary Education FIRST LANGUAGE ENGLISH 0500/03 Paper 3 Directed Writing and Composition May/June 2005 2 hours Additional Materials: Answer Booklet/Paper READ THESE INSTRUCTIONS FIRST If you have been given an Answer Booklet, follow the instructions on the front cover of the Booklet. Write your Centre number, candidate number and name on all the work you hand in. Write in dark blue or black pen on both sides of the paper. Do not use staples, paper clips, highlighters, glue or correction fluid. Dictionaries are not permitted. Answer two questions: Question 1 (Section 1) and one question from Section 2. At the end of the examination, fasten all your work securely together. All questions carry equal marks. This document consists of 4 printed pages. IB05 06_0500_03/4RP  UCLES 2005 [Turn over www.XtremePapers.com

2 © UCLES 2005 0500/03/M/J/05 Section 1: Directed Writing 1 Charities nowadays are using a new type of fundraising idea. They plan an attractive expedition or trip and ask participants to pay to join in. Some of this money pays for the trip itself but some is kept by the charity to support its other work. Imagine that you have seen the advertisement printed on the following page and have decided that you would like to take part in ‘Bike the Nile’. Write the script of a conversation between you and your parents in which you ask their permission to go on the trip and also ask them to help you raise the £1000 payment required. In your script you should: • briefly explain what ‘Bike the Nile’ involves • persuade your parents that it is both a safe and worthwhile activity for you to take part in and for them to support. Base your ideas on the material found in the advertisement. Add your own details and opinions to make the conversation more persuasive. You should write about 1 ½ – 2 sides, allowing for the size of your handwriting. Start your script: Me: Mum, Dad I’ve just seen an advertisement for the most amazing trip. Dad: Oh no, not another one of your crazy, expensive plans. (Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 15 marks for the quality of your writing.) [25]

3 © UCLES 2005 0500/03/M/J/05 [Turn over BIKE THE NILE! Enjoy an eight day cycling adventure, see the beauties of Egypt, and raise money for Elders First. What is Bike the Nile? Bike the Nile is an annual eight-day cycling trip for 99 people down the River Nile in Egypt. We provide: • flights and a bicycle • all meals / bottled water • a boat which will carry luggage and provide sleeping facilities at night • mechanics, medics and guides. All for £1000 (or the equivalent in local currency). What do previous Bike the Nile cyclists say about it? How will this help the elderly? Part of the money you contribute will be used by Elders First to support all people aged over 60 who are in need, ensuring that they get the most from life. Services we provide: • Transport – minibuses, taxis, wheelchairs • Day centres – lunches, activities, hairdressing, social contact • Home visits – social contact, medical assessment • Advice on benefits – pensions, health care, support • We also campaign on issues such as age discrimination and pensions. STAY ON IN EGYPT AFTER THE CYCLE RIDE FOR A SMALL FEE "It's four years since I did Bike the Nile but I've been on two similar expeditions since and raised over £4000 for charity. I don't mind asking people for contributions when I know it's for a good cause. My Grandmother goes to one of the Elders First Day Centres and I'm proud to know that I helped to get it started. I now belong to a cycling club and bike regularly. I got quite fit on the trip although I had really aching muscles at the start." Anka, 20 "I did Bike the Nile last year and it was something I will never forget. I don't think I would ever have done something like it on my own. Later this year I'm meeting up with some of the others who were on the trip, which will be great as I've missed them. I saw so much of the Egyptian way of life and it got me really interested in the history of the country. I did a talk about it to my class when I got back." Berti, 17.

4 Permission to reproduce items where third-party owned material protected by copyright is included has been sought and cleared where possible. Every reasonable effort has been made by the publisher (UCLES) to trace copyright holders, but if any items requiring clearance have unwittingly been included, the publisher will be pleased to make amends at the earliest possible opportunity. University of Cambridge International Examinations is part of the University of Cambridge Local Examinations Syndicate (UCLES), which is itself a department of the University of Cambridge. 0500/03/M/J/05 Section 2: Composition Write about 350 – 450 words on one of the following: 2 Argumentative/discursive writing Either (a) “In ancient Rome, people enjoyed watching gladiators fight to the death. Two thousand years later what we enjoy watching hasn’t really changed.” Using examples of modern entertainment you are familiar with (e.g. television, playstation and computer games, video, sport) discuss this statement. [25] or (b) “If ‘we are what we eat’ then teenagers are sure to become unhealthy, overweight, junk food addicts.” What do you think of young people’s eating habits today? [25] 3 Descriptive writing Either (a) A song or piece of music comes on the radio. Immediately the tune reminds you of a particularly happy or sad occasion. Describe in detail the scene you remember (real or imaginary) and your feelings at that time. [25] or (b) Describe a person (real or imaginary) who immediately appears to be either sinister or kind and trustworthy. Pay particular attention to her/his physical features and mannerisms. [25] 4 Narrative writing Either (a) You discover an old photograph at home. You ask your parents who the person in the photograph is, and when and where it was taken. There is a tense silence… Make this mystery an important part of a story. [25] or (b) You are writing a story set in the future. Your main character is a successful businesswoman who has been invited to go to her high school reunion. It is twenty- five years since she attended ‘Marsh Academy’ but curiosity compels her to go. Write the beginning of the story. Start your story: As soon as the door opened, a familiar face… [25]

UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE INTERNATIONAL EXAMINATIONS International General Certificate of Secondary Education MARK SCHEME for the June 2005 question paper 0500 FIRST LANGUAGE ENGLISH 0500/03 Paper 3 (Directed Writing and Composition), maximum mark 50 This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and students, to indicate the requirements of the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were initially instructed to award marks. It does not indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began. Any substantial changes to the mark scheme that arose from these discussions will be recorded in the published Report on the Examination. All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills demonstrated. Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the Report on the Examination. • CIE will not enter into discussion or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes. CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the June 2005 question papers for most IGCSE and GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses. www.XtremePapers.com

Grade thresholds taken for Syllabus 0500 (First Language English) in the November 2004 examination. minimum mark required for grade: maximum mark available A C E F Component 3 50 37 28 18 14 The threshold (minimum mark) for B is set halfway between those for Grades A and C. The threshold (minimum mark) for D is set halfway between those for Grades C and E. The threshold (minimum mark) for G is set as many marks below the F threshold as the E threshold is above it. Grade A* does not exist at the level of an individual component.

June 2005 IGCSE MARK SCHEME MAXIMUM MARK: 50 SYLLABUS/COMPONENT: 0500/03 FIRST LANGUAGE ENGLISH Paper 3 (Directed Writing and Composition)

Page 1 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 MARK SCHEME Examiners should refer to the Instructions to Examiners handbook for general administrative guidance. NB : All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills demonstrated. Section 1: Directed Writing 1 This question tests writing objectives W1-W5: • articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined • order and present facts, ideas and opinions • understand and use a range of appropriate vocabulary • use language and register appropriate to audience and context • make accurate and effective use of paragraphs, grammatical structures, sentences, punctuation and spelling AND aspects of reading objectives R1-R3: • understand and collate explicit meanings • understand, explain and collate implicit meanings and attitudes • select, analyse and evaluate what is relevant to specific purposes General notes on likely content The aim of the conversation is to gain approval and support; therefore the case will be strongly in favour of the trip. Details should be selected from the advertisement and used to emphasise positive benefits. These might be for the ‘elders’ who will benefit from the work of the charity or for the participants in Bike the Nile. Some of these are obvious, e.g. • the charity will gain funds that can be used to provide more services • ‘elders’ will therefore benefit in many ways • fun • a chance to see Egypt • meet lots of people • make new friends Others are implicit, e.g. • push oneself and discover new strengths • improve fitness/ own health • feel good about helping others • a unique chance to do this with lots of support Candidates should in addition explore the concerns and queries of parents, e.g. • cost • safety • health • worth of trip as a fundraising activity/ethics of this kind of fundraising

Page 2 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 The question is marked out of 15 for Writing and 10 for Reading. Use the following table to give a mark out of 15 for WRITING Band 1 13-15 Excellent sense of audience; persuasive/authoritative style; very fit for purpose; structured overall; firmly made arguments; accurate; uses language assuredly. Band 2 10-12 Demonstrates a secure sense of audience; quite stylish and fluent; sense of overall structure; arguments occasionally well developed; writing is mainly accurate, and overall language is very good. Band 3 8-9 Consistently recognisable sense of audience; mostly written in accurate, if fairly straightforward sentences; some arguments based on material are apparent; mostly quite well structured; errors minor; language straightforward but effective. Band 4 5-7 Written in an appropriate if sometimes inconsistent style; sentences mainly accurate; factual rather than argumentative; basic structure: has beginning, middle and end; fairly frequent (minor) errors; language simple with occasional attempts at persuasive effect. Band 5 3-4 Functional expression; facts selected and occasionally listed; has a beginning, but main part of letter is not always well sequenced; some serious errors in grammar and use of vocabulary. Band 6 1-2 Language and style not clear; some blurring and lack of order; despite some serious errors, can mainly be followed. 0 Serious inaccuracies and problems with language and grammar are too intrusive to gain a mark in Band 6.

Page 3 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 Use the following table to give a mark out of 10 for READING Band 1 9-10 Makes a thorough, perceptive convincing evaluation of the trip and creates a persuasive case for support. Reads effectively between the lines. Effective focus on detail and the language of the material. Band 2 7-8 Good evaluation and a clear judgement of the benefits of the trip. Sound reading between the lines. Good use overall of material with some ideas derived from the wording of the advertisement. Band 3 5-6 A number of points developed to make a satisfactory, logical choice for support. Fair overall grasp of material, with some evaluation. Band 4 3-4 Completes task by selecting a few relevant points rather literally Opportunities to consider the information not fully taken. Band 5 1-2 Parts of the answer are relevant, though material may be repeated injudiciously. 0 Answer does not relate to question and/or too much unselective copying directly from the material to gain a mark in Band 5.

Page 4 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 Section 2: Composition 2(a), 2(b), 3(a), 3(b), 4(a) and 4(b) Give two marks: • the first mark is out of 13 for content and structure: see Table A • the second mark is out of 12 for style and accuracy: see Table B [Remember that these marks will not necessarily match and one mark may well be (much) higher than the other.] The maximum overall mark for the composition is 25. Write the total clearly at the end as follows (e.g.) C7 + S10 = 17 (C standing for ‘Content’, S standing for ‘Style’). [It is important that marking is not ‘bunched’: do not be reticent about awarding marks in the top and bottom bands.]

Page 5 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 COMPOSITION TASKS: TABLE A - CONTENT AND STRUCTURE • ARGUMENTATIVE/DIS CURSIVE TASK • DESCRIPTIVE TASK • NARRATIVE TASK Band 1 11- 13 • There is a consistent quality of well developed, logical stages in an overall, at times complex argument. • Each stage is linked to and follows the preceding one and sentences within paragraphs are soundly sequenced. • There are many well defined, well developed ideas and images, describing complex atmospheres with a range of details. • Overall structure is provided through devices such as the movements of the writer, the creation of a short time span, or the creation of atmosphere or tension. There is no confusion with writing a story. Repetition is avoided and the sequence of sentences makes the picture clear to the reader. • The narrative is complex and sophisticated and may contain devices such as sub- texts, flashbacks and time lapses. Cogent details are provided where necessary or appropriate. • The different sections of the story are carefully balanced and the climax carefully managed. Sentence sequences are sometimes arranged to produce effects such as the building up of tension or providing a sudden turn of events. Band 2 9-10 • Each stage of the argument is defined and developed, although the quality of the explanation may not be consistent. • The stages follow in a generally cohesive progression. Paragraphs are mostly well sequenced, although some may finish less strongly than they begin. • There is a good selection of interesting ideas and images, with a range of details. • These are formed into an overall picture of some clarity, largely consistent. There may be occasional repetition and opportunities for development or the provision of detail may be missed. Sentences are often well sequenced and the description is often effective. • The writing develops some features that are of interest to a reader, although not consistently so. Expect the use of detail and some build- up of character or setting. • The writing is orderly and the beginning and ending (where required) are satisfactorily managed. The reader is aware of the climax even if it is not managed fully effectively. The sequencing of sentences provides clarity and engages the reader in events or atmosphere. Band 3 7-8 • There is a series of relevant points and a clear attempt is made to develop some of them. These points are relevant, straightforward and logical/coherent. • Repetition is avoided, but the order of the stages in the overall argument can be changed without adverse effect. The sequence of the sentences within paragraphs is • There is a selection of effective ideas and images that are relevant to the topic and which satisfactorily address the task. An attempt is made to create atmosphere and to provide some details. • The description provides a series of points rather than a sense of their being combined to make an overall picture, but some of the ideas are developed successfully, albeit straightforwardly. Some sentences are well sequenced. • A straightforward story (or part of story) with satisfactory identification of features such as character and setting. • While opportunities for appropriate development of ideas are sometimes missed, the overall structure is competent, and features of a developed narrative are evident. Sentences are usually sequenced to narrate events.

Page 6 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 satisfactory, although opportunities to link ideas may not be taken. Band 4 5-6 • Mainly relevant points are made and they are developed partially with some brief effectiveness. • The overall argument shows signs of structure but may be sounder at the beginning than at the end. There may be some repetition. It is normally possible to follow sequences of ideas, but there may be intrusive ideas or misleading sentences. • Some relevant and effective ideas are provided and occasionally developed a little, perhaps as a narrative. There is some feeling of atmosphere, but most of the writing is of event or description of objects or people. • There is some overall structure, but the writing may lack direction and intent. There may be interruptions in the sequence of sentences and/or some lack of clarity. • A relevant response to the topic, but largely a series of events with occasional details of character and setting. • The overall structure is sound although there are examples where a particular section is too long or too short. A climax is identified but is not effectively described or led up to. Sentence sequences narrate events and occasionally contain intrusive facts or misleading ideas. Band 5 3-4 • A few relevant points are made and although they are expanded into paragraphs, development is very simple and not always logical. • Overall structure lacks a sense of sequencing. Paragraphs used only for obvious divisions. It is sometimes possible to follow sequencing of sentences within paragraphs. • Content is relevant but lacking in scope or variety. Opportunities to provide development and detail are frequently missed. • The overall structure, though readily discernible, lacks form and dimension. The reliance on identifying events, objects and/or people sometimes leads to a sequence of sentences without progression. • A simple narrative with a beginning, middle and end (where appropriate). It may consist of simple, everyday happenings or unlikely, un- engaging events. • Unequal or inappropriate importance is given to the sections of the story. Dialogue that has no function may be used or over-used. There is no real climax. Sentence sequences are used only to link simple series of events. Band 6 1-2 • A few points are discernible but any attempt to develop them is very limited. • Overall argument only progresses here and there and the sequence of sentences is poor. • Some relevant facts are identified, but the overall picture is unclear and lacks development. • There are examples of sequenced sentences, but there is also repetition and muddled ordering. • Stories are very simple and narrate events indiscriminately. Endings are simple and lack effect. • The shape of the narrative is unclear; some of the content has no relevance to the plot. Sequences of sentences are sometimes poor, leading to a lack of clarity. 0 • Rarely relevant, little material, and presented in a disorderly structure. Not sufficient to be placed in Band 6. • Rarely relevant, little material, and presented in a disorderly structure. Not sufficient to be placed in Band 6.

Page 7 Mark Scheme Syllabus Paper IGCSE– JUNE 2005 0500 3 © University of Cambridge International Examinations 2005 COMPOSITION TASKS: TABLE B: STYLE AND ACCURACY Band 1 11-12 • fluent; variety of well made sentences, including sophisticated complex sentences where appropriate, used to achieve particular effects. • wide, consistently effective range of vocabulary with appropriately used ambitious words. • some use of grammatical devices; assured use of punctuation; spelling accurate. Band 2 9-10 • mostly fluent; sentences correctly constructed, including a variety of complex sentences. • vocabulary often effective, sometimes complex, mostly varied. • grammatically correct; punctuation mostly correct between and within sentences; very occasional spelling mistakes. Band 3 7-8 • occasional fluency; sentences of some variety and complexity, correctly constructed. • appropriate and accurate vocabulary with occasional examples of choice made to communicate precise meaning or to give interest. • simple grammatical terms correct; sentence separation mostly correct. and other forms of punctuation perhaps inconsistently used sometimes; some spelling mistakes – but no error of any sort impedes communication. Band 4 5-6 • sentences tend to be simple and patterns repetitive. Where more complicated structures are attempted there is lack of clarity and inaccuracy. • vocabulary communicates general meaning accurately. • some errors of punctuation including sentence separation; several spelling and grammatical errors, rarely serious. Band 5 3-4 • there may be some straightforward grammatically complex sentences, but others are simple and repetitively joined by ‘and’, ‘but’ and ‘so’, with other conjunctions used ineffectively if at all. • vocabulary communicates simple details/facts accurately. • many errors of punctuation, grammar and spelling, but the overall meaning is never in doubt. Band 6 1-2 • sentences are simple and sometimes faulty and/or rambling sentences obscure meaning. • vocabulary is limited and may be inaccurate. • errors of punctuation, grammar and spelling may be serious enough to impede meaning. 0 • meaning of the writing is often lost because of poor control of language; errors of punctuation, grammar and spelling too intrusive to award a mark in Band 6.