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Cambridge International AS & A Level 9093/22 February/March 2024 2 hours ENGLISH LANGUAGE Paper 2 Writing You must answer on the enclosed answer booklet. You will need: Answer booklet (enclosed) INSTRUCTIONS • Answer two questions in total: Section A: answer Question 1. Section B: answer one question. • Follow the instructions on the front cover of the answer booklet. If you need additional answer paper, ask the invigilator for a continuation booklet. • Dictionaries are not allowed. INFORMATION • The total mark for this paper is 50. • The number of marks for each question or part question is shown in brackets [ ]. This document has 4 pages. Any blank pages are indicated. [Turn over 03_9093_22_2024_1.9 © UCLES 2024 *4159508571*

Section A: Shorter writing and reflective commentary Question 1 A teenager from your school has recently been given an award for bravery. You decide to write a news report about this, which will be published in your local newspaper. Write the text for your news report, using no more than 400 words. In your writing, focus on the importance of recognising bravery and the impact this award has had on your school. [15] (a) Write a reflective commentary on your text, explaining how your linguistic choices contribute to fulfilling the task set. [10] (b) Section B: Extended writing Answer one question. EITHER Question 2 You and your family recently went on holiday for a week and stayed in a new hotel. Write a review of the hotel, which will be published on a travel website. Write between 600 and 900 words. [25] OR Question 3 Your class has just had a discussion about whether publishers should stop printing books on paper because everyone reads on screens these days. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay on the topic, giving your opinion. Write between 600 and 900 words. [25] OR Question 4 Write a story called On my doorstep, about a person who opened their front door and was surprised to find a very large, heavy bag with their name on it. Write between 600 and 900 words. [25] 03_9093_22_2024_1.9 © UCLES 2024 2

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This document consists of 10 printed pages. © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 [Turn over Cambridge International AS & A Level ENGLISH LANGUAGE 9093/22 Paper 2 Writing February/March 2024 MARK SCHEME Maximum Mark: 50 Published This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began, which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers. Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner Report for Teachers. Cambridge International will not enter into discussions about these mark schemes. Cambridge International is publishing the mark schemes for the February/March 2024 series for most Cambridge IGCSE, Cambridge International A and AS Level components, and some Cambridge O Level components.

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 2 of 10 Generic Marking Principles These general marking principles must be applied by all examiners when marking candidate answers. They should be applied alongside the specific content of the mark scheme or generic level descriptions for a question. Each question paper and mark scheme will also comply with these marking principles. GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1: Marks must be awarded in line with: • the specific content of the mark scheme or the generic level descriptors for the question • the specific skills defined in the mark scheme or in the generic level descriptors for the question • the standard of response required by a candidate as exemplified by the standardisation scripts. GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 2: Marks awarded are always whole marks (not half marks, or other fractions). GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 3: Marks must be awarded positively: • marks are awarded for correct/valid answers, as defined in the mark scheme. However, credit is given for valid answers which go beyond the scope of the syllabus and mark scheme, referring to your Team Leader as appropriate • marks are awarded when candidates clearly demonstrate what they know and can do • marks are not deducted for errors • marks are not deducted for omissions • answers should only be judged on the quality of spelling, punctuation and grammar when these features are specifically assessed by the question as indicated by the mark scheme. The meaning, however, should be unambiguous. GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 4: Rules must be applied consistently, e.g. in situations where candidates have not followed instructions or in the application of generic level descriptors.

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 3 of 10 GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 5: Marks should be awarded using the full range of marks defined in the mark scheme for the question (however; the use of the full mark range may be limited according to the quality of the candidate responses seen). GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 6: Marks awarded are based solely on the requirements as defined in the mark scheme. Marks should not be awarded with grade thresholds or grade descriptors in mind.

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 4 of 10 English & Media subject specific general marking principles (To be read in conjunction with the Generic Marking Principles (and requiring further guidance on how to place marks within levels)) Components using level descriptors: • We use level descriptors as a guide to broad understanding of the qualities normally expected of, or typical of, work in a level. • Level descriptors are a means of general guidance, and should not be interpreted as hurdle statements. • Where indicative content notes are supplied for a question, these are not a prescription of required content, and must not be treated as such. Alternative correct points and unexpected answers in candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the knowledge and skills demonstrated. • While we may have legitimate expectations as to the ground most answers may occupy, we must at all times be prepared to meet candidates on their chosen ground, provided it is relevant ground (e.g. clearly related to and derived from a relevant passage/text and meeting the mark scheme requirements for the question).

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 5 of 10 English Language specific marking instructions: AO2 Write effectively, creatively, accurately and appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes. (Writing) • Marks should be awarded equally on the basis of the level of the candidate’s written expression (range of features used and accuracy) and the development of their writing (its organisation and relevance to task and audience). • When awarding a ‘best-fit’ mark within a Level for each AO, consider each bullet point equally. AO3: Analyse the ways in which writers’ and speakers’ choices of form, structure and language produce meaning and style. (Analysis) • Marks should be awarded equally on the basis of the level of the candidate’s analysis of the text’s elements (form, structure and language) and of the writer’s stylistic choices (including how style relates to audience and shapes meaning). • When awarding a ‘best-fit’ mark within a Level for each AO, consider each bullet point equally. In response to Question 1(a), candidates are required to write no more than 400 words. In response to Questions 2, 3 and 4, candidates are required to write between 600 and 900 words. While there is no direct penalty for failing to adhere to either requirement, examiners should consider this an aspect of the response’s ‘achievement of task’ and ‘relevance to purpose’. As such, adherence to the word limit is assessed as part of the fourth bullet point of AO2.

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 6 of 10 Section A: Shorter writing and reflective commentary Marking criteria for Section A Question 1(a) Table A Level AO2: Write effectively, creatively, accurately and appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes. AO2 marks 5 • Sophisticated expression, with a wide range of language, including complex structures and less common lexis • High level of accuracy • Text is logically and very effectively organised; ideas are developed throughout in a sophisticated manner • Task is achieved fully; content is fully relevant • Audience is fully engaged 13–15 4 • Effective expression, with a range of language, including some complex structures and less common lexis • A few minor errors which do not impede communication • Text is logically organised; ideas are developed in an effective manner • Task is achieved well; content is relevant • Audience is engaged 10–12 3 • Clear expression, with a range of language, including some complex structures and some less common lexis, although there may be some repetition • Occasional errors which do not impede communication • Text is clearly organised; ideas are developed clearly • Task is achieved; content is relevant • Audience is addressed 7–9 2 • Expression is clear but may not flow easily, with some attempt to use a range of language, including mostly more common structures and lexis • Frequent errors which generally do not impede communication • Some attempt to organise text; ideas are developed in a limited manner • Task is generally achieved; content is mostly relevant • Limited evidence of an attempt to address the audience 4–6

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 7 of 10 Level AO2: Write effectively, creatively, accurately and appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes. AO2 marks 1 • Basic expression, with a limited range of language, including almost exclusively simple structures and more common lexis • Frequent errors which impede communication • Minimal attempt to organise text; minimal development of ideas • Task may have been misinterpreted or is only achieved in part; content may lack relevance in parts • Minimal evidence of an attempt to address the audience 1–3 0 • No creditable response 0

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 8 of 10 Marking criteria for Section A Question 1(b) Table B Level AO3: Analyse the ways in which writers’ and speakers’ choices of form, structure and language shape meanings. AO3 marks 5 • Sophisticated analysis of form, structure and language • Sophisticated analysis of how the writer’s stylistic choices relate to audience and shape meaning 9–10 4 • Detailed analysis of form, structure and language • Detailed analysis of how the writer’s stylistic choices relate to audience and shape meaning 7–8 3 • Clear analysis of form, structure and language • Clear analysis of how the writer’s stylistic choices relate to audience and shape meaning 5–6 2 • Limited analysis of form, structure and/or language • Limited analysis of how the writer’s stylistic choices relate to audience and shape meaning 3–4 1 • Minimal analysis of form, structure and/or language • Minimal analysis of how the writer’s stylistic choices relate to audience and shape meaning 1–2 0 • No creditable response 0

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 9 of 10 Section B: Extended writing Marking criteria for Section B Question 2, Question 3 and Question 4 Table C Level AO2: Write effectively, creatively, accurately and appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes. AO2 marks 5 • Sophisticated expression, with a wide range of language, including complex structures and less common lexis • High level of accuracy • Text is logically and effectively organised; ideas are developed throughout in a sophisticated manner • Task is achieved fully; content is fully relevant • Audience is fully engaged 21–25 4 • Effective expression, with a range of language, including some complex structures and less common lexis • A few minor errors which do not impede communication • Text is logically organised; ideas are developed in an effective manner • Task is achieved well; content is relevant • Audience is engaged 16–20 3 • Clear expression, with a range of language, including some complex structures and some less common lexis, although there may be some repetition • Occasional errors which do not impede communication • Text is clearly organised; ideas are developed clearly • Task is achieved; content is relevant • Audience is addressed 11–15 2 • Expression is clear but may not flow easily, with some attempt to use a range of language, including mostly more common structures and lexis • Frequent errors which generally do not impede communication • Some attempt to organise text; ideas are developed in a limited manner • Task is generally achieved; content is mostly relevant • Limited evidence of an attempt to address the audience 6–10

9093/22 Cambridge International AS & A Level – Mark Scheme PUBLISHED February/March 2024 © Cambridge University Press & Assessment 2024 Page 10 of 10 Level AO2: Write effectively, creatively, accurately and appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes. AO2 marks 1 • Basic expression, with a limited range of language, including almost exclusively simple structures and more common lexis • Frequent errors which impede communication • Minimal attempt to organise text; minimal development of ideas • Task may have been misinterpreted or is only achieved in part; content may lack relevance in parts • Minimal evidence of an attempt to address the audience 1–5 0 • No creditable response 0